Made my deadline for the 20/20 contest.  Feel good about what I submitted.  Having focused so long and so narrowly on that goal, and achieving it I'm now left the task of pressing onward in the story.  By myself.  Without the carrot of a deadline which is code for instant gratitfication I, all of us, have to persist.  So today I start the next leg of the tour de rewrite.

PS Thank you to all of you who took the time to read my stuff.