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MASID cont.

SCENE 11 - BARANDILLA, STAIRS, LIVING ROOM, DINING ROOM AND KITCHEN - NIGHT ABOUT 4:45 AM

 SURVEILLANCE CAM AT THE BARANDILLA

 Raeka runs downstairs.

 CAMERA ZOOMS IN TO RAEKA'S FACE

 Raeka is in total shock after seeing that nothing has happened downstairs.

 SPONTANEOUS CAM VIEWS: LIVING ROOM, DINING ROOM, KITCHEN, ZOOMING IN AND OUT TO AND FROM RAEKA

 Raeka hears different voices in her head.

MOMMY

Hey baby, don't forget to drink you medicines okay?

 

 

 

 

LOLA

(hums to the tune of Tulog na, Tulog na Lullaby)

Hhhmmm Hmm Hmm... Hhhmmm Hmm Hmm.. Hhmm Hhmm

Hhhhmmm Hm, Hm Hm Hm... Hmmm Hmmm Hm, Hm Hm Hm, Hmm

Hmm Hmm Hm Hm.. Hhmm!

RAEKA

(hearing her own voice in her head)

What's happening to you? It's just your

imagination... I have to sleep NOW!

 SUBTITLE: I love you ija... Always be a good girl ha...

LOLA

Te amo ija... Sea siempre una buena muchacha...

MOMMY

Be back before you know it...
No late night computer games or net surfing, got it?

RAEKA

Our Father who arth in Heaven... Holy be thy name...

 SPONTANEOUS CAM VIEWS: SURVEILLANCE CAM , SIDE VIEW, BACK VIEW

 Raeka runs back to her bedroom.

 CAMERA FAST ZOOMS TO RAEKA'S BEDROOM DOOR

 SFX - ZOOMING SOUND

 *BLACK OUT*

 

 

SCENE 12 - INT. RAEKA'S BEDROOM - DAY ABOUT 5:15 AM

 SFX - HEARTBEAT/ HEART POUNDING

 DIFFERENT CAM VIEW FOR EVERY BEAT

 Raeka is confused with everything that has happened to her. She is rocking back and forth in her bed. Mumbling words and calling out for her mom.

RAEKA

Mommy, what;s happening to me, mommy? Mommy where

are you? Mommy am I crazy? What's wrong with me,

mom? Why don't you tell me, mom?

                                                                                                                   DISSOLVE TO:

 

SCENE 13 - INT. RAEKA'S BEDROOM - DAY ABOUT 6 AM

CAMERA ZOOMS IN - POINT OF VIEW OF MOMMY

Mommy opens Raeka's bedroom door.

CAM VIEW: BACK VIEW OF MOMMY

The room is in total mess.

CAM VIEW: MONITOR

The PC's screen saver is playing. Mommy moves the mouse and the game Raeka's playing with is still on the screen.

CAM VIEW FROM THE FLOOR

Mommy half-kneels on the floor with a broken glass with spilled milk and blood on it. She touches the pieces.

CAM VIEW: BODY SHOT OF RAEKA AND HER MOM

Mommy walks towards her daughter and hugs the sleeping Raeka.

 

CAMERA FOCUSES ON RAEKA'S FEET BLEEDING

Mommy tends her daughter's bruised feet.

                                                                                                                   FADE OUT:

 

CREDITS

 

 

 

SCENE 14 - UNKNOWN PART OF THE HOUSE AT AN UNKNOWN TIME

FADE IN:

SURVEILLANCE VIEW:

Mommy turns off the camera, half-smiling and half-frowning.

COMPLETE TITLE OF THE SHORT FILM APPEARS.

 

CAST

 

CREDITS AGAIN


THE END


Posted: 10:26, 2006-Jun-7
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MASID

 

 

 

“MASID”

SCREENPLAY BY: Anniebelle “abbai” Valle

01-06

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

FADE IN:

SCENE 1 - COMPUTER MONITOR

CAMERA IS FOCUSED ON THE MONITOR

SFX - NATSOT FROM THE GAME

The BATHROOM of http://www.sinthaistudio.com/room.htm

 

SCENE 2 - INT. RAEKA'S BEDROOM – NIGHT

 SFX - NATSOT FROM THE INTERNET GAME AND FROM THE ENVIRONMENT ITSELF

RAEKA'S bedroom is not too big but definitely not small. Has a solo bed, with a bedside lamp with pictures and other stuff. Has a PC or a Laptop with a table beside it. A glass half-full of milk, an empty plate of cookies, and an opened medicine tablet are placed on the table. The look of the room should be not too neat, but not that messy either. The room should reflect the girl's personality: girly and artsy with a hint of mystery.

It is about 2:30 AM.

RAEKA SANTOS, a half-Filipina, half-Spanish 17 year-old girl is playing a Flash horror internet game. (http://www.sinthaistudio.com/room.htm)

CAMERA PANS FROM THE MONITOR TO THE MOUSE

Raeka is right-handed.

Raeka clicks the mouse button..

RAEKA

(screams because she got scared with the game)

Aaahh!

(then she laughs at herself for being carried away with the game)

 CAMERA PANS FROM THE MOUSE THEN BACK TO THE MONITOR

 SFX - CLICK OF THE MOUSE *CLICK*

 

Raeka clicks the Go to the next room button

 CAMERA VIEW: SIDE VIEW OF RAEKA UP TO SHOULDERS ONLY AND SIDE VIEW OF PC

SFX - NATSOT FROM THE INTERNET GAME AND FROM THE ENVIRONMENT ITSELF

 Raeka is concentrated on the game.

 She takes the glass of milk with her left hand then sips from it.

 SFX - NATSOT AND SOUND RAEKA MAKES AS SHE DRINKS THE MILK

 Raeka is about to put the glass back to the table, but the glass slips from her hand.

 SFX - BASTA SOUND OF GLASS NA NABASAG *CLINK*

 CAMERA IS ANGLED FROM THE FLOOR

RAEKA

(Iiling and is really pissed off because she's interrupted from her game)

Shit!

 CAMERA FOCUSES ON THE MESS

                                                                                                                       CUT TO:

 

SCENE 3 - INT. BARANDILLA AND STAIRS OF THE HOUSE - NIGHT

SFX - NATSOT, A BIT CREEPY

CAMERA VIEW FOCUSES ON THE DOOR (IN SUCH A WAY THAT A LITTLE BIT OF THE ROOM IS STILL SEEN: RAEKA DID NOT SHUT DOWN THE PC)

Raeka walks out of her room barefoot and closes the door.

CAMERA VIEW SUDDENLY CHANGES WHEN RAEKA'S WALKING DOWN THE STAIRS.

IT TURNS INTO A SURVEILLANCE CAM VIEW BUT MUST APPEAR AS IF A GHOST'S WATCHING OVER HER (STEADY CAM FROM ABOVE)

Raeka walks down the stairs to clean up the mess she has made.

DISSOLVE TO:

 

SCENE 4 - INT. LIVING ROOM, DINING ROOM AND KITCHEN OF THE HOUSE – NIGHT ABOUT 2:50 AM

 The house, having been lived by a (deceased) full-blooded Española with her half-Pinoy, half-Spanish daughter and granddaughter, exudes Spanish culture. With saints and other religious artifacts all over. The tight relationship of the three women could be observed through their pictures in the living room. There is an old wall clock in the dining room just before you reach the kitchen.

 CAM VIEW: SIDE VIEW OF RAEKA

 CAMERA IS ANGLED IN SUCH A WAY THAT THE WALL CLOCK FROM THE DINING ROOM CAN BE VIEWED: 2:52 AM

 SFX - NATSOT, A BIT CREEPY

 Raeka walks to the kitchen..

 CAM VIEW FROM THE SINK (STEADY)

 Raeka walks towards the sink...

 CAM FOCUSES ON THE SINK WHEREIN ONLY THE FAUCET, "BASAHAN" AND RAEKA'S HANDS CAN BE SEEN

 Raeka gets the "basahan" and opens the faucet to dampen it.

 She "turns off" the faucet and squeezes the water out of the "basahan"

 CAM VIEW: SIDE VIEW OF RAEKA

 Raeka yawns while walking...

 SURVEILLANCE CAM VIEW

 Then Raeka sees the note at the refrigerator door her MOM left for her.

 While reading the note, she gets the broom and dust pan beside the ref.

 CAMERA FOCUSES ON THE NOTE:

 VOICE OVER OF RAEKA'S MOM

      Hey baby!

            Don't forget to take your medicines okay?

            Try to sleep early, don't tire yourself...

            No late-night computer games/ net-surfing, got it?

Be back before you know it..

                                              Kisses to you,

                                                Mommy

 CAM VIEW: SIDE VIEW OF RAEKA

 Raeka walks towards the stairs looking really sleepy and tired.

 

SCENE 5 - INT. RAEKA'S BEDROOM - NIGHT ABOUT 2:57 AM

 SFX – NATSOT

 CAMERA ZOOMS IN THE DOOR KNOB

 Raeka opens her door and turns the knob.

 CAMERA PANS TO RAEKA'S FACE

 Raeka is shocked because the computer has been shut down and the mess is already gone.

RAEKA

(totally confused... talks to herself in her mind while mumbling)

Pinatay ko ba? Pero... Hindi eh... Ang gulo...

WEIRD...

 CAM VIEW: BOTTOM VIEW, ONLY RAEKA'S LEGS, HANDS, AND MEDICINE WRAPPER CAN BE SEEN

 Raeka picks up something from the floor. It is the empty "wrapper" of the medicine she took earlier.

 CAMERA FOCUSES ON RAEKA'S FACE

 Looks at the empty wrapper...

RAEKA

(cannot believe what's happening and says to herself)

Hahahahaha! This can't be happening...

RAEKA

(is already afraid and says aloud)

La? Lola?

 CAMERA FOCUSES ON THE SURROUNDINGS

 SUBTITLE: La, 'wag po ngayon mag-isa lang ako.

RAEKA

(This time, she's really scared and freaked out with whatever's happening)

La, no ahora, estoy todo solo.

 SURVEILLANCE CAM VIEW

 Raeka quickly snuggles to her bed and curls up.

 She badly wants to sleep na but cannot seem to because she is so frightened.

 CAMERA FOCUSES ON RAEKA'S EYES

 Raeka says her bedtime prayers.

 

 

RAEKA

(says in her mind)

In the name of the Father, and of the Son, and of the Holy Spirit...

 SPONTANEOUS CAM VIEWS: RAEKA'S IMAGINING OF THINGS, SOMEONE'S LOOKING AT HER, SOMEONE'S WALKING IN HER ROOM, ETC.

RAEKA

(still very afraid while saying her prayers in her mind)

Lord, thank you for one whole day,
may we all sleep peacefully... PLEASE...

RAEKA

(still praying in her mind and super frightened)

Take care of mom, give her all that she needs in

dealing with her patients. Please bring her home

safe and sound. Thanks for all of your blessings.

May we ask...

 Raeka is about to finish her prayer when suddenly she adds...

RAEKA

(whispering and pleading so that SOMEONE could hear her praying)

And please stop Lola from... Ahm.. Just stop her

and tell her to come back when mom's home...

 Raeka's awkward "feelings" suddenly stopped...

 

 

 

RAEKA

(is already calm and mumbles her prayers)

Thank you. We ask all of these through Christ our

Lord. Glory be to the Father, and to the Son, and

to the Holy Spirit. As it was in the beginning, is

now, and ever shall be, world without end. Amen. In

the name of the Father, and of the Son, and of the

Holy Spirit...

RAEKA

(right after she says this, she hears the bathroom door close gently)

Amen.

 CAM VIEW: BATHROOM DOOR CLOSING GENTLY (PART OF RAEKA'S IMAGINATION)

  

SCENE 6 - INT. RAEKA'S BEDROOM - NIGHT ABOUT 3:07 AM

 CAM VIEW: RAEKA'S POINT OF VIEW

 Raeka opens her eyes and looks around her room. (All of these would happen quickly)

 SURVEILLANCE CAM VIEW

RAEKA

(squeaks)

Aaahh!!

 Raeka completely covers herself with her blanket.

 She is ultimately scared and keeps the blanket closer to her.

 CAMERA ZOOMS IN THE FACE OF RAEKA STILL INSIDE THE BLANKET

 Raeka, totally freaked out, closes her eyes...

 CAM VIEW: BLACK OUT (RAEKA'S POV)

 Raeka hears her LOLA'S voice when she used to put her to sleep.

LOLA

(hums to the tune of Tulog na, Tulog na Lullaby)

Hhhmmm Hmm Hmm... Hhhmmm Hmm Hmm.. Hhmm Hhmm

Hhhhmmm Hm, Hm Hm Hm... Hmmm Hmmm Hm, Hm Hm Hm, Hmm

Hmm Hmm Hm Hm.. Hhmm!

 CAM VIEW: STILL RAEKA'S POINT OF VIEW

 Raeka, still under her blanket, suddenly opens her eyes.

 She then sees her Lola's shadow walking at the foot of her bed.

 CAMERA FOCUSES ON RAEKA'S FACE WHILE INSIDE THE BLANKET

 Raeka is totally frightened.

 SUBTITLE: La, please kailangan ko nang matulog... Please...

RAEKA

(sobbing, crying and really scared)

La,tengo que ir por favor a dormir... Por favor...

Please... Please... Please...

 CAM VIEW: RAEKA'S POINT OF VIEW

RAEKA

(shouting, but is still scared and teary-eyed)

I have to sleep now!

 SURVEILLANCE CAM

 The shadow is still there but when she uncovers herself, she sees nothing.

 CAM VIEW: RAEKA'S POINT OF VIEW

                                                                                                                       CUT TO:

 SCENE 7 - INT. RAEKA'S BEDROOM - NIGHT ABOUT 3:30 AM

 CAM VIEW: MEDIUM SHOT OF RAEKA THEN ZOOMS OUT

RAEKA

(completely confused)

Raeka, it's just your imagination...

 CAMERA FOCUSES ON RAEKA'S FACE

RAEKA

... It's just your imagination...It's just your

imagination, Raeka... It's just your imagination...

 Raeka goes to sleep.

 *BLACK OUT*

  

SCENE 8 - INT. RAEKA'S BEDROOM - NIGHT ABOUT 4:20 AM

 CAM VIEW: *EXPERIMENTAL* ZOOMS FROM THE FLOOR TO RAEKA'S FACE

 Raeka wakes up from a bad dream looking really "ngarag" and sweating (but not profusely naman)

 CAMERA IS ZOOMING OUT

 Raeka keeps herself calm

 SURVEILLANCE CAM

 Raeka decides she needs to pee.

 She is about to walk away from her bed when she hears...

 CAMERA ZOOMS IN TO RAEKA'S FACE

 ... a door has closed.

 Raeka decides not to pee, thinking she can still take it...

 CAMERA ZOOMS OUT

 ... But she is wrong. She really has to go, so she has no choice.

  

SCENE 9 - BARANDILLA TOWARDS THE BATHROOM - NIGHT ABOUT 4:30 AM

 CAM VIEW: BACK VIEW OF RAEKA

 Raeka sings to calm herself on her way to the bathroom.

RAEKA

(sings aloud)

Iisang kislap, kumukutitap... Iisang ngiti mong

pinapangarap... Happy-ing happy sa 'yo oh... Happy-

ing happy... Happy-ing happy... happy-ing happy sa

'yo oh...

 While Raeka is getting near the bathroom, she "senses" something, the bathroom light is turned on, then changes her song…

RAEKA

... Our Father who arth in Heaven...

 SPONTANEOUS CAM VIEWS: BACK, FRONT SIDE, ETC.

RAEKA

... Holy be Thy name. Thy kingdom come, Thy will be

done, on earth as it is in Heaven.

 SFX - TOILET FLUSHING

 Raeka hears the toilet flushing.

 She then sings louder.

RAEKA

(with a louder voice)

Give us this day, our daily bread...

 SFX - TOP OF THE TOILET BEING PUT DOWN

 Raeka stops from walking because she hears the top of the toilet being put down.

RAEKA

... And forgive us our trespasses...

 CAM VIEW: RAEKA'S BACK/ SIDE VIEW

 Raeka reaches the door of the bathroom.

 She does the sign of the cross.

 CAMERA ZOOMS INTO DOOR KNOB

 Just as Raeka is about to turn the knob, she hears a sound inside the bathroom.

 SFX - SHOWER CURTAIN BEING PULLED/ THINGS INSIDE THE BATHROOM BEING MOVED/ BATHROOM WINDOW BEING CLOSED.

  

SCENE 10 - INT. BATHROOM - NIGHT ABOUT 4:35 AM

 *TOTAL DARKNESS*

 The lights of the bathroom are turned off.

 CAM VIEW: RAEKA'S POINT OF VIEW FOCUSING ON THE LIGHT

 Raeka turns on the light.

 CAM VIEW: RAEKA'S POINT OF VIEW CHECKING THE BATHROOM

 Nothing happened inside the bathroom.

 Raeka takes a pee.

 CAMERA FOCUSES ON THE "FLUSHER" OF THE TOILET

 Raeka is finished, stands up, then flushes the toilet.

 CAM VIEW: BATHROOM MIRROR

 Raeka walks toward the sink and is about to open the faucet when she hears something downstairs.

 SFX - CRASHING DOWNSTAIRS SUCH AS SOFA SET, DINING TABLE AND CHAIRS AND OTHERS MOVING, GLASSES AND OTHER PORCELAINS BROKEN INTO PIECES.

 

SCENE 11 - BARANDILLA, STAIRS, LIVING ROOM, DINING ROOM AND KITCHEN - NIGHT ABOUT 4:45 AM

 SURVEILLANCE CAM AT THE BARANDILLA

 Raeka runs downstairs.

 CAMERA ZOOMS IN TO RAEKA'S FACE

 Raeka is in total shock after seeing that nothing has happened downstairs.

 SPONTANEOUS CAM VIEWS: LIVING ROOM, DINING ROOM, KITCHEN, ZOOMING IN AND OUT TO AND FROM RAEKA

 Raeka hears different voices in her head.

MOMMY

Hey baby, don't forget to drink you medicines okay?

 

 

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