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Destiny's Divas - Episode Three (FINAL of TRILOGY)
10:21, 2006-Sep-15
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DESTINY'S DIVAS Episode Three
LOGLINE
Another kidnapped child, ruthless abductors, an eight year old kidnapping and murder case and one satisfied spirit.
EPISODE THREE OF A TRILOGY
SYNOPSIS
In Atlanta there's another kidnapped child before Destiny's Desire even hits town. This time, however, it's a girl, and our team of super-sleuths go into overdrive. The use of an Atlanta detective to assist them on the case adds a new twist, as the girls have to erase his memory of them once the case is solved, as well as anyone else who's involved, including the abductors.
Finally returning home, to the New England area, it's time for the girls of D & D to turn their attention towards Destiny's true desire and that is finding those responsible for her brother's kidnapping, molestation, and murder when she was only nine years old. Unorthodox detective work sets the stage for D & D to get a confession by the man who nabbed Josh Masters eight years previous, and in that confession he fingers the man who actually killed the young boy.
Now that Destiny's spirit has been satisfied, it's time to remove the powers that her elite team was given, allowing them to be the teen-aged girls they really are. She plans the removal of their powers for New Year's Eve.
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Destiny's Divas - Episode Two
10:11, 2006-Sep-15
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DESTINY'S DIVAS Episode Two
LOGLINE
A rock band rises to fame and their members receive supernatural powers. They seek out a kidnapped child, capture his abductors, hand them over to the police and remain anonymous. EPISODE TWO of THREE - A TRILOGY
SYNOPSIS
At the Battle of the Bands, Destiny's Desire makes it to the top of the leader board, allowing them to make it to round two, the final round. Nine other bands make it to round two, including JB & the Tucks. After JB's perfomance, during the second round of competition, he was informed that his son was kidnapped earlier that day. That announcement forced JB to withdraw from further competition as they were tied with Destiny's Desire for top honors. Destiny's Desire refuses to accept a win by default,
Destiny's Desire receives the rest of their powers. After returning home to perfect these new additions to their arsenaal of unconventional weapons, they head to Albany to try and locate JB's son, capture his abductors, and at the same time staying out of the limelight. The secret to their success is being able to remain incognito. With Destiny's help, the four girls locate the hideout of Jeremy's abductors. Using the powers Destiny gave them, as well as their youthful agility, D & D captures the abductors, release Jeremy, return him to the police, and remain anonymous.
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Destiny's Divas - Episode One
10:00, 2006-Sep-15
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DESTINY'S DIVAS Episode One
LOGLINE
A restless spirit of a teenaged girl, revenge for her brother's kidnapping, molestation, and murder, and an unlikely team of female super-sleuths, under the guise of an all-female rock band, combine their efforts to find kidnapped children and subdue their abductors.
SYNOPSIS
In Episode One - Destiny Masters dies. Her restless spirit won't rest until those responsible for her brother's kidnapping, molestation, and death, are captured and behind bars.
Upon her death by a lightning bolt, Destiny received supernatural powers, but powers she could not use herself, when it came to finding her brother's killers. She finds, however, that she can transfer these powers to others, so she picks her elite team of super-sleuths carefully, giving them just enough of a woman's curiosity to ascertain their desire to be a part of this elite band and group.
Danielle Dee - a seventeen year old red-head, never held a guitar before Destiny entered her life. Now she's being asked to be the lead guitarist and leader of Destiny's elite band, Destiny's Desire.
Dana Kay - another seventeen year old, never sang before, outside of her bathroom, and through Destiny she now has the voice of an angel.
Lisa Mack - a third seventeen year old, has played the bass guitar as a sophmore in high school, but never to the level of a rock star. With Destiny's help she's a master on the bass and doesn't miss a beat.
Wendy Parks, the only eighteen year old, has been to many rock concerts with her brother, at the Boston Garden, but she'd never sat behind a set of drums before Destiny came to her in a dream. With Destiny's assist she has the fastest hands on the toms.
With her band Destiny's Desire all together, it's time for Destiny to inform her elite group what their instruments can do, other than for the purpose for which they were designed. It's also a time for them to know what Destiny's Desire stands for, and what their role will be.
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A Little about me
05:18, 2006-Sep-2
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I am 60 years old and live on Boston's North Shore in Massachusetts.
I've been writing since the early 1980's having no experience whatsoever with writing.
I started writing as a favor for a fellow worker in a machine shop. He had 750 written pages of text that he wanted to have put onto paper. This was back before PC's became a household name, so it meant reamsof paper and many typewriter ribbons and correction tape.
Well after two years and nine rewrites that I remember, not to mention the 12 reams of typing paper etc. that was used, I couldn't find my friend anywhere. I'd left the job where we both worked, but either way he dropped off the face of the earth and couldn't be found. After eight years, I trashed the manuscript I'd worked on for two years, and it was then at 1500 ds typewriten pages, so I dare not guess the word count. I refused to steal someone else's work, even though the majority ofitwas done by me.
It was during this interim that I became interested in writing for myself. I started off with something I knew and worked up from there. Overturned was writen in 1993, and rewriten at least 10 times before being published in 2004 In 2001 I published Destiny of the Divas and in 2003 I published its sequel, Destiny of the Divas II - Angel of Mercy. Late in 2004 I wrote and published my only sci-fi story KASHMANTOU. In 2005 I published Mountain of Love.
In November of 2005 I was involved with NaNoWriMo (National November Writing Month, where writers from all over the world tried to write, from scratch, a 50,000 word novel or more in 30 days or less. I accomplished the 50,000 goal on day 10 with a total of 52,012 words and by day 22 I had 65,000 words to finish the story. Well I started editing it before the end of November, and by late December "Let Freedom Ring" was published.
Early in 2006 I decided to try my hand at writing screenplays. Once again I was getting my feet wet in territories I knew nothing about, so I did some serious research, online, and found http://www.screenwritersutopia.com - a forum for screenwriters, and I asked a lot of questions. Fortunately I got a lot of helpful answers. Somewhere along the line I found http://www.scriptbuddy.com and registered to try using their format for writing a screenplay. Well I loved the site so much that I paid for three months and now have eight screenplays completed, and another one being worked on.
Someone sent me an e-mail about Scriptologist.com, and here I am.
I am dedicated to the profession of writing. and am involved with a writer's chat http://writerschatroom.com and Writer Circle a Yahoo Groups writing group.
More about me later. Ernie
OVERTURNED - Excerpt
12:47, 2006-Aug-29
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OVERTURNED
INT. SCHOOL BUS - MOUNTAIN ROAD - NIGHT
The school bus starts the slow climb to the highest point on Mountain Road. A thick layer of clouds suddenly surrounds the bus. Nick slows down to ten miles an hour.
As he reaches the crest, Nick checks the brakes and the pedal slams hard to the floorboards.
The bus is well on its way downhill. Nick pumps the brakes but the bus continues to pick up speed fast.
Forty... forty-five... fifty miles an hour.
There's pandemonium inside the school bus.
COACH (YELLING to Nick) What's wrong?
NICK (YELLING Back) I've got no brakes.
Fifty-five... Sixty... seventy miles an hour.
Nick pulls hard on the emergency brake but it snaps.
Severty-five... eighty... miles an hour.
Nick shuts off the engine. Thesolid wall of granite stares him in the face at less than a hundred feet in front of the bus.
Everyone braces for a crash.
COACH (YELLING To Everyone) Brace yourselves.
Eighty-five... ninety miles an hour.
Nick steers the bus into the left lane and turns slowly towards the right. At the last second he turns the wheel sharply to the left.
The bus flips to the right and the exposed tires slam hard against the wall of granite.
The tires explode and catapult the bus across the road and over the guardrail.
INT. THE SCHOOL BUS - LATER - NIGHT
Tony comes to and lets out a deep GROAN. He gently touches the side of his head.
TONY Oh man, what did I hit?
Tony touches the large knot on the side of his head.
TONY Oh God that hurts.
Tony removes his hand quickly.
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