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SOLAR'S IDEA

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I don't usually spend time at strip bars, but, my buddy, like always, paid for every dollar I spent. I met Solar - she claims it's her birth name. Solar is a red head, five-two, 30, and an ass that will make every girl in the room suck her teeth. Solar gave me two private dances before asking me what I'm about. I told her I'm a screenwriter. She told me about how she needs to make rent tonight before she gets her roommate mad.

 

I jokingly told Solar that I want to take her to space and never return. She proposed a more plausible idea: We go on a road trip and make my first movie; raw, sexual, powerful - not knowing where or how it will climax, and for that matter end. Does Solar leave me for some richer man, or does she shoot a "man in Reno just to watch him die"?

 

Two hours after the strip bar closed we are now at her place. She's packing her shit, writing an apology note for her old roommate, and kising me passionately while I play around with future scenes... My digital camera should be enough to complete this project. I could afford to take off for a month, so I'm not even thinking twice about Solar and her raw energy.

 

FADE IN:

 

EXT. SPANISH COFFEE SHOP -- VAGUE SUNRISE

 

SOLAR, 30, red head, sexually beautiful, is still wearing her stripper clothes. She pours milk in JOSE'S coffee. Jose is 29, Spanish, great looking exotic eyes.

 

                                                             SOLAR

                                                        (big grin)

                                If the scenes move real slow we'll have to act some out.

 

                                                             JOSE

                                As long as the road introduces us to interesting experiences the

                                film will force itself to be a documentary.

 

Solar sits next to Jose, looks deep into his eyes, and sucks on his neck. Jose quickly grabs his digital camera and begins the documentary of a film that has no begining, middle, or end, but is a climax from start to where ever and how ever it will finish.

 

INT. CAR -- HOURS LATER

 

Solar sleeps like a beautiful angel. Jose stares at her stripper's outfit.

 

                                                      JOSE (V.O.)

                                                (driving)

                                  What the fuck am I doing? She's a damn slut. She shakes her

                                  ass for a living. What is she robs my camera? What if the film turns

                                  out to be the worse decision of my life?

 

EXT. GAS STATION -- VERY SUNNY

 

Solar walks out with bottled water. Jose pumps gas.

 

 


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